Decision-Level Ordinal Modeling for Multimodal Essay Scoring with Large Language Models

Recent advances in Large Language Models (LLMs) have substantially transformed Automated Essay Scoring (AES), yet the internal mechanisms underlying LLM-based scoring remain poorly understood. In this work, we systematically analyze the hidden representations of eight LLMs across two English essay datasets (ASAP++, CSEE) and one Portuguese dataset (ENEM). Using linear probing, cross-prompt generalization, dimensionality reduction, and neuron-level analyses, we find consistent evidence that essay quality information is encoded in a linearly accessible form within LLM representations. These representations emerge progressively across layers, remain robust across prompting strategies, and partially transfer across essay prompts despite differences in scoring rubrics. In addition, nonlinear probes provide only marginal and inconsistent improvements over linear probes, suggesting that most essay quality information is already linearly decodable. We further identify individual ``essay scoring neurons'' whose activations strongly correlate with essay scores and whose behavior is sensitive to targeted intervention. Moreover, the layer-wise distribution of these neurons systematically shifts with essay length, with longer essays relying more heavily on deeper layers. Overall, our findings provide evidence that LLMs encode structured representations related to essay quality and offer new insights into the interpretability of LLM-based AES systems.

Automated Essay Scoring (AES) systems must judge interdependent discourse elements (e.g., lead, claim, evidence, conclusion), yet most approaches treat these in isolation, harming coherence and generalization. We investigate task-aware fine-tuning of LLaMA-3.1-8B for AES using parameter-efficient LoRA with 4-bit quantization and compare three training curricula: (i) Sequential (progressively fine-tuning on lead, then position, then claim, then evidence, then conclusion), (ii) Independent (task-specific models), and (iii) Randomized (shuffled multi-task). Experiments on the PERSUADE~2.0 corpus show that modeling task dependencies matters: Sequential fine-tuning yields the strongest overall results, including F1 scores of 65% (evidence) and 87% (conclusion) and corresponding accuracies of 63% and 85%, surpassing Independent training and outperforming a general-purpose LLaMA-70B baseline on conclusion despite its far larger capacity. Randomized training improves position scoring (57% F1) but is less consistent elsewhere. These findings indicate that (1) curriculum design aligned with discourse structure can materially improve AES, and (2) small, task-optimized models can be competitive with substantially larger Large Language Models (LLM), offering a practical path to scalable, cost-effective assessment. We release templates and implementation details to facilitate reproduction and future work on curriculum design for educational NLP.

Large language models (LLMs) have recently reshaped Automated Essay Scoring (AES), yet prior studies typically examine individual techniques in isolation, limiting understanding of their relative merits for English as a Second Language (L2) writing. To bridge this gap, we presents a comprehensive comparison of major LLM-based AES paradigms on IELTS Writing Task~2. On this unified benchmark, we evaluate four approaches: (i) encoder-based classification fine-tuning, (ii) zero- and few-shot prompting, (iii) instruction tuning and Retrieval-Augmented Generation (RAG), and (iv) Supervised Fine-Tuning combined with Direct Preference Optimization (DPO) and RAG. Our results reveal clear accuracy-cost-robustness trade-offs across methods, the best configuration, integrating k-SFT and RAG, achieves the strongest overall results with F1-Score 93%. This study offers the first unified empirical comparison of modern LLM-based AES strategies for English L2, promising potential in auto-grading writing tasks. Code is public at https://github.com/MinhNguyenDS/LLM_AES-EnL2