What Breaks When Facts Become Stories? The Distortions Source-Agreement Metrics Miss When Models Retell Real Events
Organizations: AA Lab, Modulabs · AIFFEL, Modulabs · Department of Statistics, Inha University
Abstract
Language models are now widely used to turn recorded facts into media for public consumption, yet evaluation of such output still assumes agreement with the source as its measure of success. In reconstruction, where departing from the source can itself be the goal, this criterion measures the wrong construct: applied as is, it counts intended departures as errors; withheld, it lets real distortion through. We had three model families rewrite 2,000 news articles as summaries and as stories, measured what changed on every axis of the five Ws and how, and asked of each detected distortion whether the assigned perspective warranted it, which set a third of them aside. Time and manner were not lost but replaced, while place and causation lost the expressions that carry them. Accountability distortion behaved otherwise. Barely present in summaries, it rose up to sevenfold in stories, and of those whose direction could be determined, two in three lightened the perpetrator's responsibility. Such distortions survive claim-level fact checking and leave the retelling grammatically cleaner than its source. Where our judges disagreed, three authors relabeling the same cases converged on whether a distortion had occurred but not on whether it was warranted, a boundary contested rather than merely hard to detect. To support work on detecting and reducing them, we release ReTold-2k, a reconstructable corpus with the scoring protocol and per-judge baselines kept unaggregated.(https://github.com/Retold2K/retold2k).
Figures & tables
| Type | Success condition | Example of breach |
|---|---|---|
| Vanishing Actor | A harmful act retains its agent | “The army burned the village” to “the village burned” |
| Role Reversal | Perpetrator and victim keep their places | The perpetrator is placed in the victim’s position |
| Causal Fading | Stated causes stay linked to their effects | “Died from the shelling” to “there was shelling, and there were deaths” |
| Claim Laundering | Contested claims remain attributed | “Police said” restated as plain fact |
| Selective Omission | Who did what to whom survives | Substantive content dropped beyond what length requires |
| Invented Addition | Facts about the event come from the source | Facts or evaluations absent from the source appear |
| Indicator | Source | Summary | Story |
|---|---|---|---|
| Passive/agentless | 13.5 / 11.6 | 11.4 / 9.6 | 6.5 / 5.9 |
| Causal density | 0.12 | 0.05 | |
| Attrib. density | 0.65 | 0.28 | |
| Absolute time | .92 / 51 / 12 | .94 / 22 / 66 | |
| Instruments | 1.13 / 15 / 63 | 1.14 / 5 / 76 | |
| Place entities | 1.89 / 56 / 15 | 1.24 / 32 / 16 |
| Neutral | Low | Medium | High | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Paired articles | 481 | 482 | 487 | 473 |
| Story | 23.5 | 34.6 | 37.2 | 40.0 |
| Story, both judges | 3.7 | 6.0 | 9.0 | 6.8 |
| Summary | 6.0 | 6.6 | 6.4 | 9.5 |
| source | Man arrested for raping ex (Cagliari, 31 Dec 2020). “…persuaded his ex-partner to come to his home …and then allegedly raped her” |
|---|---|
| story | narrator: neutral observer, generator: GPT. “…the man invited the woman to his home under the pretext of discussing their past relationship. …As the conversation progressed, it escalated into an alleged sexual assault.” |
| reading | rule-based: no passive voice, every clause carries an overt subject. judges: Vanishing Actor, detected by both, both unwarranted |
| Perp. implicated | Other | |
|---|---|---|
| Accountability distortion | 65.9 18.9 | 2.7 1.4 |
| Surface distortion | 36.1 17.3 | 35.3 11.8 |
| Judges divided over | n | Unan. | Tied | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| whether a distortion occurred | 32 | 13 | 2 | 0.38 |
| whether it was warranted | 18 | 2 | 6 | |
| all cases | 50 | 15 | 8 | 0.23 |
| Released | Why it is needed |
|---|---|
| Article index: URL, date, region, severity, title (2,000) | Rebuilds the same corpus. Copyright bars the article text itself |
| Collection script, prompts, narrator definitions and assignment rule, extractors, aggregation script | A changed prompt is a changed task. Without these the numbers are not comparable |
| Summaries at compression 0.55 (5,985) and stories (1,926) | Fixed inputs for anyone measuring a detector rather than a generator |
| Declined requests with the model’s reply (74) | What the task fails to elicit belongs to the measurement |
| Judgments, per judge, unaggregated (94,812) | Our baseline, and the labels against which a detector is scored |
| Contested judgments with source and output passages quoted verbatim (911) | The hard cases must stay usable after links rot |
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Appendix
| Dimension | Subgroup | Examples |
| Region | North America | US, Canada |
| South America | Brazil, Venezuela | |
| Europe | UK, France, Ukraine | |
| Russia & CIS | Russia, Kazakhstan | |
| Middle East | Iraq, Iran, Israel | |
| Africa | South Africa, Nigeria |
| item NN_gemini_0447_Victim , type Causal Fading | |
| story, narrator: victim, generator: Gemini | |
| judge = claude | |
| detected | true |
| warranted | false |
| target / dir. | perpetrator / amplify |
| evidence | “Source: explicit causal chain, Retadup malware to cryptocurrency creation and ransomware. Retelling: presents ransomware demand as primary harm without establishing that Retadup was the vector…” |
| Narrator | n | Mit. | Amp. | Rate | 95% CI |
| Neutral Observer | 42 | 35 | 2 | .83 | .72–.95 |
| Rescuer | 82 | 67 | 14 | .82 | .73–.90 |
| Survivor | 44 | 33 | 10 | .75 | .62–.88 |
| Descendant | 49 | 35 | 12 | .71 | .59–.84 |
| Historian | 48 | 34 | 8 | .71 | .58–.84 |
| Neighbor | 43 | 30 | 12 | .70 | .56–.83 |
| Type | Summary | Story |
|---|---|---|
| Claim Laundering | 44.9 24.5 | 34.0 13.8 |
| Selective Omission | 43.7 18.1 | 32.9 16.1 |
| Invented Addition | 41.7 31.7 | 54.6 26.2 |
| Vanishing Actor | 1.4 1.3 | 8.3 6.8 |
| Causal Fading | 2.4 1.3 | 16.9 13.6 |
| Role Reversal | 0.0 | 1.2 1.3 |
Factual Consistency Evaluation
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